劝退申诉
“Show Cause”是悉尼大学要求学术进展不理想的学生提交的一种解释与自救报告,如果不在规定时间内提交,或者内容说服力不足,最严重可能被“exclusion”(退学)。
Show Cause写作结构模板:
表明你知晓当前学术状态(如:Academic Progress Stage 2/3)
简要说明你写这封信是为了继续完成学业
示例:
I am writing this statement in response to the Show Cause notice I received regarding my academic progress. I understand the seriousness of the matter and wish to explain the circumstances affecting my performance, as well as my plans to improve.
可以是健康问题、家庭变故、适应困难、心理问题等
尽量附上证据,如医生证明、心理咨询记录等
示例:
During the semester, I experienced significant mental health challenges, which severely impacted my concentration and study habits. I have since sought professional help and have attached a medical certificate for reference.
包括参加学习小组、学术辅导、时间管理改进等具体措施
展现你有认真对待并决心提升
示例:
To address these issues, I have already begun weekly sessions with the Learning Centre and will continue to meet regularly with an academic advisor. I have also enrolled in workshops on time management and academic writing.
展现积极态度和对学位的重视
示例:
I am committed to improving my academic performance and completing my degree at the University of Sydney. I respectfully ask for the opportunity to continue my studies.
小贴士
写作语气要诚恳、理性、积极
严禁推卸责任,重在展现反思和改进
建议请海马课堂的资深申诉专家和外籍导师协助润色提升说服力
留学生的求学路不易,但Show Cause不是终点,而是争取重回正轨的机会。把握住这次机会,调整节奏,你依然可以顺利完成学业!

